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Good points

- The best pitch by far
- Good use of powerpoint
- An actual pitch, covered all the criteria required
- Lots of potential
- Very keen and enthusiastic
- Seemed confident

Bad points

- Lost confidence in idea as questions were asked
- A bit too much text on powerpoint, better to have headings which you expand on in your presentation
- Needed more research into Leukemia/ illness - poor detail
- You say "This type of film has never been done before. It is based on 'My Sisters Keeper' and 'Love Actually'" - Bit of a contradiction?
- Not the most original of ideas